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Plot Holes

Hey friends! Is nayi Series ki kahani mein aap sabka khushaamdeed. Is story ka name hai – “Plot Holes” Ye Horror Story hai. Agar aapko Horror Kahaniya, Moral Stories ya Bedtime Stories padhne ka shauk hai, toh is kahani ko poora zaroor padhein.

Plot Holes | Naye Darawni Kahaniya | Hindi Stories

Wo din jab maine apna pehla khudra hole dhunda, woh din tha jab mera acha dost wapis zinda ho gaya.

Hum high school mein thay aur bohot bewakoof thay. Uska naam Jake tha, aur hum school ke baad aksar jungle mein ek purane chhode hue ghar ke paas ja kar masti karte thay. Hum aise hi bewakoof baatein karte thay jaise k teenagers karte hain. Yeh ghar kafi bara tha, sach mein. Do manzil ka ghar tha, ya agar choti chhat ko bhi gina jaye to teen manzil ka. Kahani hai ke kuch saalon pehle ek budhi aurat ne is ghar ko sheher ki zindagi se bachne ke liye banaya tha, lekin kisi wajah se usne kabhi nahi pura kiya. Shayad woh mar gayi hogi. Har halat mein, jab woh kaam chod diya, to ghar adhura reh gaya.

To Jake aur main ghar ke paas jaya karte thay aur wahaan masti karte thay, ek-dusre ko dara kar ya ghar ko daryaft kar kar. Jo bhi mann mein aata tha. Aam taur par, hum bohat ehtiyaat se kaam lete thay – ya shayad humare sath sirf bhagwan ki meher thi – lekin hamesha kuch aisa nahi hua jo hamein chinta karne pe majboor karta.

Phir ek din jab hum doosri manzil ko explore kar rahe thay, to Jake ke pair ke neeche ki lakdiyan tut gayi aur woh gir gaya. Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ke ghar ki haalat itni kharab ho sakti thi, kyunke jab woh neeche gir gaya, to pehli manzil bhi toot gayi aur woh basement mein gir gaya. Main neeche utra aur pehli manzil ke tuta huye hole se dekha. Andhera tha (lekin hamesha hamare pass flashlight hoti thi), to maine us par roshni dali. Main kabhi nahi bhool sakta jo maine dekha.

Lagta hai ke koi ek lakdi ya kuch aur cheez aise gir gayi ke jab Jake zameen par gira, to woh seedha uske pait mein ghuss gayi jaise ek neza. Main use dabne ki koshish karte hue dekh sakta tha. Main use gurgle karte sun sakta tha… phir woh ruk gaya.

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Woh marr gaya tha. Is main mujhe koi shak nahi tha. Hamari bewakoofi ne use maut ke ghat utar di. Main hairan reh gaya. Main nahi janta tha ke main kya karoon.

To main bas… bhaga. Ghar se bahar bhaga aur use wahaan chhod kar aaya.

Sham ho rahi thi jab main ghar pohncha aur main seedha apne kamre mein chala gaya. Main kisi se baat nahi ki. Main kahin bhi nahi ruka. Bas main chahta tha ke main us manzar ko bhool jao. Meri maa-baap ne mujh se baat karne ki koshish ki, lekin main neend ka bahana banaya aur woh chale gaye. Raat ko, Jake ke maa-baap ka phone aaya ke woh kahan hai. Woh mujhe utha kar pucha aur maine kaha ke mujhe kuch pata nahi. Baad mein wohi usual Agar tumhe use dekho, to hamein bata dena! wala dialogue hua aur maine sirf sar hilaya aur phir wapas so gaya.

Agle din mujhe school jaana tha aur main bilkul jazbat mein tha. Main nahi chahta tha ke ghar pe rukoon, lekin main ghar par bhi nahi reh sakta tha. Main kaafi sure tha ke Jake ke maa-baap ne mujh pe kuch shak kar liya tha. Is liye main school gaya. School waisa hi tha jaisa humesha hota tha. Log subah mein masti karte thay aur baat karte thay. Main apne dosto ke pass gaya jin ke saath main pehle ki tarah samay bitata tha, aur mera dil dhadakna band ho gaya.

Wahaan Jake khara tha.

Woh wahaan khara tha, bas hasta aur apni normal shakal mein tha. Jab usne mujhe dekha, to woh dekha aur muskuraya aur mere paas aaya. Usne ek mazak kiya lekin maine suna hi nahi. Main sirf dekhta raha.

Hey, theek ho? usne pucha, fikar mein aane laga.

Tum… tum theek ho? yehi main keh saka.

Acha, haan! Main theek hoon! Main kyun nahi hounga? Usne thoda hasa, lekin mujhe ajeeb si nazar se dekha.

Tumhe… kuch nahi pata? Main ne isse jitni ahemiyat se kaha sakta tha, wohi maine kiya. Agar woh samajh jata, to woh dikhata nahi.

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Kuch pata kya? Usne jawab diya aur phir school ki ghanti baj gayi. Usne alvida kaha aur mujhe ajeeb nazar se dekha kar class ki taraf chala gaya. Main bas uske peeche dekhta raha hairan reh gaya. Mere dost yahaan kyun thay? Maine to use marte dekha tha! Kam az kam woh hospital mein hona chahiye tha! Lekin woh theek tha.

Main class gaya lekin mujhe concentrate nahi ho raha tha. Aur, Main bas Jake ke baare mein sochta raha aur yeh ke woh marr gaya hona chahiye tha. Main koshish karta raha sochne ki kaise woh bach gaya ho sakta hai, lekin main us ajeeb si raaz ki khai ko bhar nahi sakta tha. Class ke baad, maine fais la kiya ke main woh ghar dekhunga.

Jake school ke baad mujhse mulaqat karne aaya aur pucha kya main ab bhi milna chahta hoon. Maine usey bataya ke mujhe theek se mehsoos nahi ho raha tha aur hum kal milenge. Usne woh baat maan li aur chala gaya. Yani ke main khush nahi tha ke mera dost wapas aaya, lekin jab maine usey dekha, to mere andar kuch ajeeb si feeling thi. Uska yahan hona theek nahi tha. Usko zinda nahi hona chahiye tha. Usko yahan nahi hona chahiye tha! Main ne usey dekha…

To main us din dopahar ghar gaya akela.

Jab main ghar mein gya, to maine kuch mehsoos kiya. Yeh ajeeb lekin pehchani hui feeling thi. Wohi feeling thi jo mujhe Jake ko dekh kar hoti thi. Ke kuch theek nahi tha, aur woh bas… off tha. Lekin yahan, yeh ek lambe waqt tak mehsoos hoti thi. Yeh woh taaza Kya bakwaas hai? nahi thi jo maine apne dost ko dekha tha. Main ne aage badha aur neeche dekha.

Bilkul theek, woh wahi maud hai jahan usne gir kar chot khayi thi! Main ne aik sigh of relief di aur jhuk gaya. To shayad main pagal nahi tha! Main ne apni aam flashlight nikali aur usey hole mein roshni dal di. Haan! Wahan thi woh tabahi jahan maine usey girte dekha tha! Bas… Jake nahi tha. Kya woh kuch azaadi pa gaya tha? Kya woh jaadu se phir se paida hua tha? Main ne flashlight upar karke hole ki taraf dekha.

Woh wahan nahi tha.

Meri saans meri gale mein atak gayi aur maine ceiling par roshni dalne ka jaldi se shuru kar diya. Kahan gayab ho gaya!?! Yeh toh wahi maud par neeche hona chahiye tha! Lekin kuch nahi tha. Main ne sidhe seedhe stairs par daur karke dekha, aur bila shuba, woh jahan se gir gaya tha, wahan kuch nahi tha.

Kuch nahi.

Kuch toh galat tha. Sachmuch galat tha. Main wapas pehli hole ki taraf chala gaya aur andar jhankne laga.

Main yaqeen karta hoon ke woh waqt tha jo mere muqaddar ko theek kar diya. Agar maine bas usay ignore kiya hota, agay badh gaya hota aur khush rehne laga hota ke mera dost wapas aaya hai, to shayad main apni zindagi aise hi jari rakhta. Lekin us lamhe…

Ye Story Bhi Dekhen : Woh Upar Se Aaya Tha?

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Maine kuch dekha. Sirf aik tezi se guzishta kuch siyah cheez ko, jo roshni ke raaste se bhi ziada siyah thi, urr kar dikh gaya. Main ne saans phoonka aur pichhla gaya, taizi se saans lene laga. Main jaanta hoon ke main bhaagna chahiye tha, lekin meri tajassus ne mujhe pakad liya tha. Aur meri samaji taraf se yeh keh rahi thi ke yeh shayad kuch janwar ho ya roshni ka jadoo. Is liye maine apni darr ko nigal liya aur dobara dekhne ke liye jhuk gaya.

Main ne woh siyah tezi ko phir nahi dekha, lekin mujhe kuch aur notice hua. Hole ke neeche ke boards aur tabahi gayab the. Yeh dekh kar main jaan gaya ke kuch galat tha. Koi aik nazar mein itni jaldi kuch aisa saaf nahi kar sakta.

Main bhag gaya. Aur, Main us ghar se nikal kar jungle ke andar daurta gaya, kasam kha kar ke kuch mujhe peeche kar raha hai. Main mein kuch wahan kuch tha… lekin ab mujhe pata hai ke woh bas mujhe dekh raha tha. Abhi.

Main ghar pohncha aur darwaza band kar ke apne bistar par chhala gaya. Mera jism murda ho gaya aur main bas wahin lete raha, samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke kya ho raha hai.

Mujhe thoda waqt laga, lekin maine akhir kar apne aap ko bistar se uthaya. Mujhe samajhna tha ke kya ho raha hai, lekin main wapas us ghar mein jaane ka iraada nahi kar raha tha, kyun ke kuch darinda wahan ho sakta tha. Is liye maine wohi kiya jo koi teenager karta hai. Main internet par gaya aur research ki.

Yeh dheere thi aur pehle toh kuch khas kamyabi nahi mili. Paranormal search karne par mujhe ajeeb tasveerein aur kahaniyan milti thin. Dost wapas zinda ho jata hai search karne se mujhe zombi ki kahaniyan milti thin. Missing time ke baare mein dhoondhne par mujhe thoda sa mazeed information mili. Zyadatar kahaniyan aliens ke aas paas ghoomti thin, lekin kuch kahaniyan meri tawajjo ko bula rahi thin. Jaise kuch pagal chezein ghatak ho jati hain (jaise car accident ya hadsa) aur phir aik achanak waqt ki kuddi hoti hai aur sab kuch theek ho jata hai. Jaise ke kuch bhi nahi hua.

Aik missing time board par aik post thi jo meri tawajjo ko akarshit karne lagi. Uska title tha Plot Holes aur sirf kuch din pehle post ki gayi thi. Main ne us par dilchaspi se click kiya.

Logon ne yahan yeh spekualt kiya ke missing

time ki wajah kya thi. Zyadatar dafa toh woh aliens ya dimensions… kuch bhi hota tha. Lekin is shakhs ne aisa tawajjo se behave kiya jaise usko sach mein ilm tha. Aur uski wajah sab se ajeeb thi.

Ye Story Bhi Dekhen : Woh Upar Se Aaya Tha?

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Us ne shuru kiya by ek milti julti kahani sunakar. In short, uski biwi ek ghar ke hadse mein mar gayi jab unke ghar ke ek hisse mein aandhi mein gir gaya. Uski taraf pohnchne ki koshish karte hue, us par aur debris gire aur us behosh ho gaya. Jab uska hosh aya, to wo drawing room mein baitha tha aur uski biwi use jaga rahi thi. Ghar theek tha, koi aafat ka koi nishaan nahi tha, aur woh… zinda thi! Uska toh mood theek tha, lekin usne ek ajeeb sa ehsaas bayan kiya. Jaise usne kuch aisa samajh liya tha jo usko nahi samajhna chahiye tha aur uski biwi wahaan nahi honi chahiye thi. Mere saath Jake ke saath jo ehsaas hua.

Dhire-dhire, woh uske aas-paas nahi reh sakta tha. Yeh bahut ajeeb tha. Isliye usne chhod diya. Woh sadak par chala gaya, apne paas jitna paisa tha lekar, aur yahan wahan ajeeb-ajeeb chhoti naukriyan karke motels mein rukte hue. Jaise-jaise woh aage badha, usne shodhna shuru kiya. Bahut saara samay lag gaya, lekin usne aise logon ko dhoonda jo aise hi anubhav kar rahe the. Unme se adhikansh logon ne ise ek chamatkar bataya aur apni zindagi jee rahe the. Dusre log woh ehsaas nahi nikal sakte the, jaise usne kiya.

Sabhi ne wahi tarah ki baat batayi. Kisi ghatna ne kuch hone ka karan hona chahiye tha… Koi vyakti mar jata ya koi landmark nasht ho jata, lekin baad mein woh chamatkar se wapas aa jata. Toh yeh kya tha?

Lekhak ek rukawat par the jab usne kuch aisa dhundh liya. Jab woh logon ki khoj karte waqt un logon ke saath jo jinda nahi hone chahiye the, tab usne ek kitab ke samiksha ke bare mein jaana. Dikhai dene wale sabse naye kitab mein ek sahayak patra ne din bachaya tha jiske liye unke nayakon ke liye dushmanon se ladna tha. Lekin pichli kitab mein (ek alag lekhak ke dwara likhi gayi) us patra ki maut ho chuki thi. To, yeh patra wapas nahi aa sakta tha lekin agar woh nahi aata, to mukhya patraon ki maut ho jati.

Reviewer ne kaha ki yeh usne kabhi dekha hai ki kahani mein itni badi khichdi padi ho. Isne forum lekhak aur mujhe sochne par majboor kiya. Usne kaha ki woh thoda baad mein phir post karega jab usne kuch anushasan kiya aur main uspe gussa nahi kiya. Mere paas bhi kuch cheezen thin jo main jaanchna chahta tha. Uske bawajood, maine use ek message bheja ki maine uski post padhi hai aur mere saath kuch aisa hi hua tha. Fir maine jaldi raat ko call kar di. Agar maine woh lakshya dhundhna tha toh maine bohot sambhal ke rahna tha.

Agli subah, maine utkar apni pehli koshish shuru ki cheezen dhundhne ki. Main jaanta hoon ki yeh kuch pagalpan lagta hai lekin kuch samasya hai ismein, is samiksha ko padhne ke baad kuch alag sa mahsus hone laga. Kisi ko mar jana chahiye tha… lekin yeh chhod diya gaya taki woh baad mein kuch ahem kar sake… yeh itna anjaan kyun lag raha tha.

Pehle kuch dinon mein, maine Jake ke aas-paas kuch nahi notice kiya, keval ek ajeeb sa ehsaas tha. Kisi aur ne waisa nahi kiya. Teesre din mujhe meri pehli samasya nazar aayi. Woh choti si thi. Kewal choti si cheez thi, lekin woh thi. Meri class mein ek ladki ek skirt pehna kar aayi thi, lekin ek period ke dauraan jeans mein badal gayi. Main jaanta hoon ki yeh kaise dikhta hai, lekin main maan leta hoon, maine isliye notice kiya kyun ki woh skirt pehni hui thi. Lekin saath minute ke andar campus par chalte hue ek doosri class ke liye jeans pehnna? Yeh toh samanya lag sakta hai, lekin yeh samanya nahi tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise ek scene badalte samay kuch gadbad ho gayi ho.

Uske baad, sab kuch bigad gaya. Main har taraf par badlav dekhne laga. Ek sign subah mein black tha, lekin raat ko light green ho gaya ya ek dost ek sweater pehne se t-shirt mein badal gaya jab main ek pal ke liye dekha nahi. Logon ko yeh badlav notice karna chahiye tha, lekin kisi ne bhi notice nahi kiya. Shayad yeh woh ajeeb ehsaas tha jo mujhe Jake ke hadse ke baad aaya ya shayad aapko unhe dekhna hoga. Lekin main dekhta raha, woh sab kahin par the.

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Plot Holes | Naye Darawni Kahaniya | Hindi Stories

Lagbhag ek hafte aur aadha lag gaya jab mujhe Plot Holes lekhak ka jawab mila. Usne apna parichay Dennis ke roop mein diya aur der se jawab dene ke liye maafi mangi. Uska karan kya tha? Usne

… plot holes ko dekhte waqt pakad liya tha. Usne wohi cheezen notice ki thi jo maine bhi ki thi! Yeh pehli baar tha jab maine is bande se vaak samvad kiya tha, lekin woh samasya jo usne batayi, woh meri samasya se bilkul milti thi. Ek cheez ke alawa. Ek galti se likhi gayi dukan ke upar ke board ko raat mein notice karke, usne ek pal ke liye dekha aur dekha ek dhundhli si kaali surat board ke aas-pass ud rahi thi. Woh dhundhli thi, jaise us surat ko dhundh ke dekha ja raha ho jo vahaan nahi thi, lekin jab woh entiti ud gayi, toh likhi hui galti gayab ho gayi.

Mujhe ek thandak mehsoos hui. Yeh… mere ghar mein jo mujhe dikhne ko mila, usse bahut nazdeek lag raha tha. Ab tak maine use puri tarah se nahi dekha tha, lekin ab main jaanta tha main kis cheez ko dhoondh raha hoon. I wish maine nahi dekha hota.

Yeh der nahi lagaya ki main unhe dekhne lag gaya. Pata chala ki aapko sahi samay par dekhna hoga. Jab aisa lagta hai ki koi bhi aapko nahi dekh raha ya dhyan nahi de raha, tab aap unhe dekh sakte hain. Ek dhundhli surat ek kala kurta aur topi mein dhak ke ek lambi kaali poshak mein dikhayi dene lagi, aur woh cheez tab tak bigadti gayi jab tak woh badal nahi gayi. Maine dekha kisi ne ek saathi ke t-shirt ko ek jacket aur shirt mein badal diya ek sardi ke din class mein. Aur maine dekha kisi ne ek student ke dwaara library mein ek poore stack kitabein badal di, jab tak unhe ek vidyarthi ne uthane se pehle nahi kiya. Kisi ne bhi unhe notice nahi kiya, bas jaise plot holes, aapko unhe notice karne ke liye usi sanket par hona chahiye.

Main Dennis se thora online baat chit kar raha tha aur usne isi khayal se muttafiq ho gaya. Aisa lag raha tha ke aapko aik ko note karna parayga taa ke aap doosray ko dekhsakain. Agar aap isko nazr andaz kar saktay thay to phir aapki zindagi chalti rahaygi. Lekin agar aap jasoos qisam ke thay to phir aap hum jaisay ho gaye. Aap bas unko bar bar dekhtay rahain gay. Main paagal honay laga tha. Main kisi ko kuch keh nahi sakta tha aur Jake bar bar mujhse pareshan rehta tha ke hum aur kab milain ge. Phir, Main sirf usko dekh nahi sakta tha. Woh… asal main woh nahi tha! Woh woh… cheezein thi jo usko wapas layi thin. Shayad uski kuch khaas qismat thi ya kuch aisa magar mujhe iski koi malumat nahi thi.

Cheezein mazeed badal gayin jab main Dennis ke sath Skype par baat kar raha tha. Usne mujh se poocha ke kya woh mujhe pehchan rahay thay. Main ne usko keh diya ke nahi, aur phir woh kuch lambe arsay tak khamosh raha. Thora sa tang karne ke baad, usne akhirkaar jawab diya aur mujhe bataya ke uske aik dost jo is waqiye ko talash karne mein uski madad kar raha tha, woh gayab ho gaya tha. Kisi ko uske wujood ka bhi yaad nahi tha.

Jab woh apne dost ke ghar gaya, to Dennis ne dekha ke woh kaafi saf suthra tha, sirf kuch cheezein idhar udhar pari thin. Jab woh ghar mein ghoomta, to woh cheezein jo jagah se hil gayi thin, khud he apni jagah par aa gayin. Dennis yakin tha ke iske peeche kisi wajh se wohi cheezein thin, aur usne apne shak ko tasdeeq kiya jab usne dekha ke kisi ne ek kitab jo zameen par phenki gayi thi, usko wapas rakh di… Aur phir mera dekh kar us taraf mur kar dekha.

Dono lambi lambi muddaton tak ek dosray ko dekhtay rahay, ye cheez Dennis ki taraf dekhti rahi jabke woh us ke chehre mein jo kuch bhi chhupa ho sakta tha, uska andhera hood uske neechay chhupa kar dekhti rahi. Aur phir… woh chali gayi. Woh mur kar gayi aur aik dewaar se nikal gayi. Phir ye laga ke ab kuch bhi jaga par nahi tha. Ghar mein aisa lag raha tha jaise wahaan kabhi kuch hua hi nahi tha. Phir Dennis ne kuch aur bhi notice kiya. Kisi malik ko ya uski shanakht ko darust karne wali tasveerain ya cheezein nahi thin. Bas wohi log the jo aisa ghar banatay thay jo ke apni qadim family ki tasveer ya kuch mail apne naam se muntaqil hoti thi. Lekin yahaan aisa kuch nahi tha. Yani jaise kabhi kisi ne is fully furnished ghar mein rehna hi nahi tha.

Is waqt par mujhe pareshani hone lagi. Dennis ke dost gayab ho gaye thay aur kisi ko unki mawjudgi yaad nahi thi. Main ne tab shak lagana shuru kiya ke agar ye cheezein kisi ko wapas laa sakti hain, to woh kisi ko asani se khatam kar sakti hain, sahi? Iska matlab tha ke main bhi khatre mein tha.

Is ke baad, maine ruk gaya. Main ne sab ko bhool diya. Main ne Dennis ke paigham ko ignore kiya. Phir, Main ne un sab jagaon ko ignore karne ki koshish ki jo main bar bar notice karta tha. Main… un andheri cheezon ko ignore karne ki koshish ki jab main unko pakar leta tha. Main ne Jake ke sath phir se waqt guzarne ki koshish ki. Lekin her dafa jab hum sath thay… aisa lagta tha ke main jhooti tasveer ki taraf dekh raha hoon. Aur usko dekh kar mujhe un cheezon ki yaad ati thi. Main sochta tha ke shayad aik ne usko us kachray se uthaya tha, uske jism mein woh board ghusedi thi, uske zakhamon ko aisa kiya tha jaise kuch bhi nahi hua tha…

Main ne sab kuch ignore karne ki koshish ki. Lekin Dennis ko ignore karna mushkil tha. Woh bas mujhe dhundta rehta tha. Main ne usko apne email aur messengers se block kiya, lekin woh naye account bananay lagay takay mujhe mazeed paigham bhej sake. Aur din guzarne par lagta tha ke woh din bhar mazeed paigham bhej raha tha.

Ye Story Bhi Dekhen : Woh Upar Se Aaya Tha?

Plot Holes | Naye Darawni Kahaniya | Hindi Stories

Aakhirkaar, aik din, maine aik naye account se uski taraf se email hasil kiya jo clearly Dennis ka tha. Main ne usko delete karne aur block karne ke baare mein socha lekin email ke subject ne mujhe haddi seene par le aya.

WOH MUJH PAR PEECHE HAIN. SKYPE PAR AO. MUJHE MADAD CHAHIYE.

Main nahi janta tha ke kya karna chahiye. Agar Dennis in cheezon ke saath mushkil mein tha, to phir main uski madad karna tha. Main bas usko chhod nahi sakta tha. Lekin uske baad… woh shayad apni nigaahen mujh par kar dain.

Main madad karna tha. Main usko akela nahi chhor sakta tha. Khas kar agar woh khatre mein tha. Main ne

Skype par log in kiya, uske naye account ko add kiya, aur foran aik video chat request mila.

Plot Holes

Dennis apne apartment mein tha aur lights off thi, woh bohat pareshan lag raha tha.

Kya ho raha hai? main ne poocha jab main karib aaya.

Woh mere peechay pare thay, usne kaha, uski awaz ek pareshani bhari hui hui siski thi. Aur mazeed aur zyada woh aikatay jaa rahay hain. Aur sirf un holes ko bharnay ke liye nahi. Woh mujhe dekh rahay hain.

Tum sure ho?

Jawab mein, usne apna laptop uthaya aur kitchen ki taraf le gaya jo ke window ke samnay tha. Usne laptop ko window ke samnay rakh diya aur curtain ko khol diya. Main kuch bhi nahi dekh sakta tha jab tak usne light on nahi ki.

Mera dil ruk gaya.

Maine sirf aik ko aik waqt mein dekha tha. Shayad do agar kuch bari tabdeeli hoti. Lekin kam az kam teen ya chaar to un khirki ke peechay thay, sirf woh adhoori, dhanki chehron ke sath humein ghoor rahe thay. Usne tezi se roshni band ki aur laptop khud pe wapis palat diya.

Ye Story Bhi Dekhen : Woh Upar Se Aaya Tha?

Plot Holes | Naye Darawni Kahaniya | Hindi Stories

Tum dekh rahe ho? Main nahi janta main kya karoon. Main Jerry ki tarah nahi banna chahta. Mujhe batao main kya karoon! Uski pareshani barhti ja rahi thi. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Main nahi janta tha ke yeh cheezein kis qisam ki hain. Main nahi janta tha ke unka maqsad kya tha. Ya unhe kaise roka ja sakta tha. Mere munh se awaaz aai lekin main woh alfaz nahi keh sakta tha jo usko sun’ne ki zarurat thi.

Aur jab main kuch kehne ki koshish kar raha tha, to maine unko uske peechay dekha.

Ek darnay mein. Aik almari ke sath.

Dennis! Main ne cheekha. Tumhare peechay!

Usne tezi se palat kar pehla cheez ke qareeb qadam rakha. Khuda, ab to ek sath kai aur aa rahe thay. Teen, phir chaar, phir paanch… Uska koi bhi moqa nahi tha.

Pehla cheez aik inky baazu ke sath aage barha aur seedha uske seenay mein ghusa diya. Koi bhi khoon nahi tha. Ya Dennis ki dari hui cheekh siwaye thi. Usne apne seenay ko pakar liya, jaise ke cheez ne usko wahan bandh diya tha… main nahi janta kis cheez se. Uski rago se? Uske dil se? Khoob, isse yeh bhi ho sakta hai ke woh sirf uski ruh se lekar gaye. Phir baaqi ne us pe gira. Woh us pe gir gaye jaise aik siyah kutte ki tarah. Usko apni siyah mojudgi mein jazb kar liya. Main cheekh nahi sakta tha. Aur, Main nazar nahi hata sakta tha. Main bas dekhta raha jab woh cheezein us pe giri. Phir, dheere dheere… woh peechay hat gaye.

Dennis gayab ho gaya. Main ne aansu rok liye jab maine dekha ke woh jagah jahan pehle woh tha, woh khali thi. Main janta tha ke kya ho gaya tha. Woh gayab ho gaya tha. Kisi ko bhi uski yaad nahi reh gayi. Woh aik khudaai thi jo fill ki jani thi aur dekh bhal ki jani thi.

Phir unka tawajjo computer ki taraf muda.

Meri ankhen bari hui jab mujhe samajh aaya. Main bhi aik khudaai thi. Main unki barri chaal ki aik masla thi. Aik kaanta jo unke is duniya ke ghair sahih hone ki ghalationon pe tawajjo khichta tha.

Aur mujhe dekh bhal ki zarurat thi.

Ye Story Bhi Dekhen : Woh Upar Se Aaya Tha?

Plot Holes | Naye Darawni Kahaniya | Hindi Stories

Maine computer ko band karne ki fikar bhi nahi ki. Main sirf khara hua aur palat kar dekha… ke khudaaiyon ki aik jama’at ke saath aik chehre se chehra aik samne hai. Apne ghar mein. Apne kamre mein. Mere peechay mera meiz tha jab aik, siyah saya mere paas aaya. Uska bazu utha aur main ne uske dhundhlay siyah aba aur uske siyah ungliyon ke alag alag ungliyon ko dekhna almost mumkin tha. Main nahi hil sakta tha. Main jam gaya tha. Aur phir… us ne hamla kiya.

Maine fizikan mein mehsoos nahi kiya jab uski ungli mere seenay mein ghusi. Lekin maine isse kahin gehrayi mein mehsoos kiya. Jaise ke woh mere shanakht ke ek jayeib hissay ko pakar rahi ho. Main mehsoos kiya ke main zaya ho gaya hoon, bayan kiya gaya hoon, aur sab se zyada… poori tarah se darta hua hoon. Main ne cheekha jab woh dabane lagi. Dard hua.

Bohat zyada dard hua. Meri nazar kamzor ho gayi lekin main ne doosre mujmo’n ko mere aas paas ghumte hue mehsoos kiya. Woh mere jism ke har taraf se mujhe mukhlis rangon mein lipta hua tha. Main ne cheekha lekin koi awaaz nahi nikli. Main mehsoos kiya ke woh haath mere seenay se hat raha hai, kuch intihai shakhsiyat ke sath mere. Meri jism lachar mehsoos hua phir… main ne kuch mehsoos nahi kiya.

Woh mere paaon se shuru ho gaya, dhire dhire meri thand, dard aur darr ko bilkul khaak mein tabdeel karte hue. Main isse sirf aik tarah se tasvir rakh sakta hoon… khatma ho jane ka mehsoos. Wahan mehsoos tha – mazboot mehsoos – phir kuch nahi tha. Yeh dheere dheere aage barha, meri bazuon aur tangoon ke saath chadh kar mukhlis jism ko lipta lekin uski shanakht aur duniya ki awaazon aur meri samne ki tasveer ke ilawa. Phir kuch mere samne nahi tha ke siyah andheron se mukhlis hona.

Main gayab ho gaya. Aur, Main janta tha. Main mar gaya tha. Ya aur bura bhi. Main aurat nahi

bana. Mere samne sirf andhera tha. Main koshish ki ke void mein awaz doon, ke apne raste par badhoon, lekin main koi bhi harkat nahi kar sakta tha. Ya zyada baraber, asal mein mera paon uthane ke liye koi paon nahi tha ya dene ke liye koi munh. Main sirf aik zaa’ika tha. Aik laasha jo khaali khairiyat ke behtay andheron mein latka hua tha.

Main hun wahan. Bilkul, kuch bhi nahi. Main hil nahi sakta ya main sochta nahi ke mujh mein kuch bacha hai hilne ke liye. Sab kuch gayab ho gaya hai. Main sochta hoon ab kya hoga. Phir, Main sochta hoon ke Jake ka anjaam kya tha. Main ye bhi sochne laga ke kya ye maut hai ya kuch aur bura cheez. Mere nak mein un jagahon mein apna dam torne ka mujh par azaab hai. Kya ye maut hai ya bilkul mit jana? Main yaqeen karta hoon ke Dennis bhi wohi cheezein mehsoos kar raha hai jo main mehsoos kar raha hoon. Main almost imagine kar sakta hoon usko bhi, isi khaliye mein latka hua. Shayad ek din hum aik doosre se millein. Ye woh umeed hai jo main zinda rakhne ki koshish karta hoon. Ye mujhe sanje mein rakhti hai ke shayad ek din, main yahan akela na ho.

Yeh meri kahani ka aakhri hissa hai. Main chahta hoon ke yeh behtar hoti. Main chahta hoon ke main keh sakta hoon ke main ne muqabla kiya aur apne aap ko bachaya. Kam az kam, ke main bhaag raha tha. Lekin, kuch kahaniyon ke khushaali nahi hoti. Lekin, main yaqeen karta hoon ke maine aap mein aik aakhri cheez par to sochne par majboor kar diya hai. Agar main maut ya… mit gaya hoon, to phir maine yeh kaise likha? Toh, mera pyara dost, aapne abhi apni pehli plot hole discover kar li hai. Hoshiyar rahiye agar aap aur bhi dekhein to.

Khatam!!

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